it was a good story.
all except the cheating part.
major turn off... xP

you write so well susan brown, well done, can we have more please. thank you.xxxx

just read your story, loved it plz write more, thank's regard's martin.

what a fantastic visitor...I had a neighbors dog who came from a mile away to sneak into my house at nite and wake me up with his huge cock in my face...he was sooooo horny and came a ton..

this was an amazing story. i was wet all the way through. thank you. ;]

Male from Montreal area, (Canada) looking for 1st encounter with male dog or pony. I would just love submitting myself to animal anal or animal blow job

I am still a virgin. And I plan to wait till I find the right male. ;] But I have had lots of oral and love a dog eating me out.

Fiction but well written , many details , sensual , looks true...

When are you going to finish this?! It was great!

This is a great story. Thank you very much for this erotic tale. ;]

loved every minute of the story emptied my balls twice

some really good stories on this site, the one above turned me on.

I like this stroy, it is one that I keeping back to write. It is very well written and that is the beauty of fiction, you can make whatever happen you want to. I hope to read more from you soon.

i wen't to a farm today and i was following a 24 yo 150 lb at least d cup chick she was hot as helll all i could think of was this....

k9 rules

very good would like to see the end in her cervix

love the story, especially about her being able to eat her own pussy...delicious

mmmmmm, what a story I'm so turned on.........

Too short, insufficient development, not enough details of the actual fucking. This has the makings of being a great story, you just need to use what you have already written as an outline then fill in the gaps with great, descriptive eroticia. The reader needs to feel as though he/she is a part of the story.

fantastic... it reminds me of a 16yo i picked up and fucked. she had 34-EE cup tits... i'd love her to ride my cock and get my dog to fuck her ass... just so i could watch her face as she's degraded into a dog whore... i still have her number and i'm going to call her to night after reading this story!!! she cums so hard!!!